Jack was so excited, but sad at the same time. level five was harder then expected, His heart was beating so fast that he almost passed out. Jack wanted to do the splash party, but they refused to do it. As soon as Jack jumped in the pool his body froze and he thought going to freeze. The teacher shouted at Jack to do 50 meter freestyle there and back, but Jack was not ready what was about to happen. This was it said Jack. When Jack was struggling, the teacher said do ten. And then, suddenly his breath was cut short and he fell down in to the depths of the pool…
Good job! I felt the same thing as well in swimming 😅
A very nice effort, Jack, but try to make sure your sentences flow smoothly as they can seem a little unconnected.
0k i will remember to do that next time